Monday, June 7, 2010

Industrial Tourism and the National Parks

The author uses different kind of transitions throughout the story. He created a section for the problem of industrial tourism and a section for the solution. Within the problems and solutions that he created, he numbered them, letting the reader know that ahead, there would be another point. Also, in some part of the story, he wrote according to what people might be in doubt and responded to them. For example, he wrote about those people who would agree with him and those who would not.
Another way of transition that he used is thinking as the reader, he thought that some people might ask about something about what he had in a paragraph and in the next one paragraph he started with questions that some readers might have, such as "What about the children? what about the aged and infirm?" or "Is this assumption correct?". After that, he would answer and propose something.

1 comment:

  1. Those are really good points you mentioned there. The writer gave abundent points of views and details to support his arguement. Everything is pretty organized in a fluent way that readers can easily relate the current topic to the next. The transitions were doing a great deal of work here.

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